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into water by ~boundlessgravity:iconboundlessgravity:

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you meet a girl
the feeling of the ocean floor
          dropping away








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*thetaoofchaos Jun 9, 2009, 2:45:30 PM
interesting. the visual i got from "the ocean floor dropping away" (which is a lovely sentiment) was that of floating/shooting towards the water's surface. so the title of "into water" makes me wonder if this is re-entry. ;)

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The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
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*HaikuKitty Jun 9, 2009, 3:15:28 PM
lucky girl....

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First learn the meaning of what you say, and then speak.
Epictetus

“The world we live in is vastly different from the world we think we live in.” Nicholas Taleb
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~Ennuiiunne Jun 16, 2009, 10:21:33 PM
*smiles and sighs*. Thank you very much. I needed this.

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I don't kiss the lines with rhythm and rhyme the way I used to.
I write with a feather sword in my own blood.
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